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I pat the puppy
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Lovingly I pat Jessie my small, cute poodle at the beautiful park. The park had bright green trees. I adored the park. I threw my excited, playful poodle a red, shiny ball. My poodle raced after the ball that had already rolled far away. My playful Pup bounded up to me knocking me over. I stumbled backwards. I came down with a thud on the cold, hard ground. 'Ouch that hurt' I thought. I saw Jessie run back to try and find the ball. Then suddenly Jessie, came racing up to me as I lay on the ground still shocked from the frightful fall.
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